Zooming Scooters
I can taste the silky air in my mouth.
I can see trees moving their branches.
I can hear the teacher talking.
I can smell the pollen in the flowers dancing in the wind.
I can feel the sticky rubber under my hands.
BY JORDAN
Zooming Scooters
I can taste the silky air zooming into my mouth softy.
I can see a fast zooming scooter which is purple.
I can hear a zooming sound coming from the weal wile I go to the white line .
I fell a rubber when I hand touches the bars.
I can smell the flowers beside me when I was scootering along with the others in my class.
By Mikaela Smith.
My Scooter
I can taste the silky,
cold air rushing round my
mouth.
I can see scooters
of all colours going by.
I can hear scooters going fast.
I can feel rubbery handle bars.
I can smell silky air.
By Luke
Wonderful poetry .... you did so well standing up in front of everyone reading them! Ka Pai!!
ReplyDeleteSarah Bailey
(Ella-Rose's Mum)
What descriptive writing Room 6. I love the way you have used your senses in your writing. What was the easiest sense to describe?
ReplyDeleteWhat super descriptive writing writers. You used your senses well and we could picture it in our mind. How long did it take you?
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